Post your conclusion paragraph for your essay here.
It should have a restatement of the thesis, a summarization of your reasons, and a kicker.
February 3, 2011 by Joseph Turkot
Post your conclusion paragraph for your essay here.
It should have a restatement of the thesis, a summarization of your reasons, and a kicker.
Your identity isn’t your identity until you start making choices later in life. Like if you like playing sports or hanging out with your friends that’s your identity. Just don’t run into life so quickly, live life for awhile then start living it.
i really like the first sentence, that really hooked me into the conclusion of what your identitiy is.
I think identity is something that people are not born with and its something that you create. Because everyday you make choices and those choices effect your identity. E very choice you make will count against your identity.
Good job summarizing and putting the pieces together for the conclusion. You have your restated thesis, a reason, and a kicker.
Your identity is important and you make your own identity. Everyone in this world haves the same identity so your identity is like a snowflake. The reasons we each create our own identity is that your chooses make, determined how far you go in life. It will also give you a better life. Your identity is what you make of it so choose your identity wisely or it might affect your life.
Nice job providing a restatement of thesis, summarization of one reason, and then a kicker to close.
Identity is something I have to achieve on my own. Because if I don’t achieve now for my identity what will I achieve as I get older. Be careful of the identity you choose because when you get older it will effect you. Pick an identity that you can hold onto and keep forever. Like if its your plan for when you hit that position as an adult.
I believe that we have the power to chance are identites. No matter where you want to do.Be careful on what choose you make in life or at school, your job.Your identity tells a lot about you like what are your favortie things to do.
I think you can change your identity from bad to good or good to bad. An example is If someone’s using drugs and they go to rehab they changed. Identityis like trees not one tree is shaped the same.
Everyone is made to be with their own identity. The reason why my identity expresses who I am is because I have a good personality and expressive mind. So do you like your identity? If you do do feel free to live it and always stay with it.
I believe in the quote because your identity expresses who you are and expresses your life.
The reason why my identity expresses who I am is because I have a creative part to my identity I love to paint and sketch I am an artist just like my mom.
So do you get why your identity is so important to you? keep your identity safe because no one else can have the same identity as you. Your identity is all about you and no one else just you.
I believe that people can be what they want cause it a free world. People can choose to be around good or evil influences. Identity is what people want to be.
Identity is something you cant be born with but can be created by no one but you, and if anybody make up your own identity then you a fake person and you let other people take control over you life.
One of the things I do when im not in school is baby sit my nice and nephuews because they make me laugh. Im a aunt to12 kids and they drive me crazy but they are funny . And they are fun and funny to be with .
My personal view about identity is how you make yourself, and making good choices and facing tough challenges. The reason for making good choices is it’s the right thing and you’re a good citizen. Identity is how you make a reputation and your personality.
I belive that people are born with some of there identity but you get most of your identity when you grow up. So your identity is what you want it to be.
My Personal aspect about identity it is your pride and possesion. It is something that should’nt be takin advantage of. Its the most vauluable thing in your life. Your identity is what makes you human.
Don’t rush in life! What I mean is take it easy, don’t pick hard choices when you can pick easy choices. Don’t make it hard for yourself. Just don’t rush in life, take small steps before you make big ones. Stay a kid before you take responsibility for your life!
Identity is a lot more then where you came from. It’s about who you are. Identity has to do with your beliefs, habits, appearance, values, and so much more. You create you identity for yourself. If you do not like your identity you can change it to fit in to your life.
In my conclusion your identity can mean many things, or even be many things. It could be your hair, nails, clothes, or even your house. Your identity is whatever you make it or want it to be. When your born you only have part of your identity, but as u get older it changes.
My identity is what I make it. I chose to do music and chill with my friends. And get an education also have fun with my family. Next, I do it because I want to accomplish in life. Identity is what you create in life.
Your identity as in your features is what you are born with. But your personality is what you make of it. What I mean is you are how you are. So remember your identity is how you are.
you can put whats inside your identity than you chageing it in life. Rather who you are you can and can,t change the way you are thats why you are who you are.people can,t change who you are sometimes they can.
my conclusion for identity is that always trust in your self and have faith while saying nothing is in possible within your self knowing that you can do anything that you put your mind to it. but sometimes your identity speaks to you currently and that you dont even know it. But the good thing that i founded is that once you tell about your identity in society or in public people notice you more often because your feeding your background to everyone thats why it is important to way out your identy to different people all over the world.
John beauzile
All identities are all different. Your identity is something you have to find, for example your actions. So sit back and just think what’s your own identity.
Your indentity is diffent from your mom and dad . You make up your own indentity in many ways like the way you talk and walk and act . so i belive that your not bron with your mom and dad identity you make it up yourself.